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Comments for 'The Sovereign: Chapter 1' |
Steele
1:05 am | April 25, 2003
With all the fecal matter flying around, I see why you named it the Soveriegn:] Excluding all the bodily wastes and bowel movements, 7/10.
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HaloFREAK
8:58 pm | April 19, 2003
oops. my bad
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HaloFREAK
5:13 pm | April 19, 2003
well im not entirely surprised.
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HaloFREAK
5:13 pm | April 19, 2003
well im not entirely surprised.
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el_halo_diablo
4:35 pm | April 19, 2003
Not exactly sure, cause all that talk about the bowel movements n' stuff kinda discouraged me to read it lol.
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HaloFREAK
12:54 am | April 19, 2003
i thought it would be funny, but i guess not. no more crap like that, i swear. and the 60 marines are only a recon force, didnt you see aliens? Besides, on normal marines do reasonably well against covenant forces when they are well armed, and the CORUSCAN is packing some $#*%. so besides that crapping scene, how was the chapter as a WHOLE?
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James Kinsella
8:45 pm | April 18, 2003
I quit reading after the whole feces-rectum thing. I didn't want a repeat of the fanfic with the grenade and the elite's asshole...
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saturn
6:41 pm | April 18, 2003
oops, that's me below. why do i always do that?!
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Anonymous
6:39 pm | April 18, 2003
"wiped the feces from his rectum..." oh boy... im glad you know how to use such dense terms but that was a little heavy. interesting with the accent though. and very realistic, everyone has to take a crap and sometimes ppl get an order at the wrong time.
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HunterKiller
6:14 pm | April 18, 2003
60 Marines?! Thats not enough to hold out against a turd. And you didn't need to include the part about the marine taking a shit and wiping his ass.
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Havok
5:22 pm | April 18, 2003
building up to some action on the surface? when a person os thinking something, put it in italics. just a thought.
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