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Comments for 'Chapters 1-2' |
HaloFREAK
11:42 am | April 18, 2003
oh, and this story was written for school(7th grade) and wasnt graded by how good the story was.
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HaloFREAK
11:27 am | April 18, 2003
thanks for the feedback guys.That one was my rough draft and i couldnt find away to improve it. Next few chapters ill try to make longer and more interesting. oh and it didnt have a title cuz its a sort of demo.
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Shadow Spartan
5:56 pm | April 17, 2003
i dunno...no title? really short chapters...spend more time on it and make them longer...what is the name of this fic?
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Berconius
2:00 pm | April 17, 2003
Cortana 1.5? At least look in your neareest resource material and find some name from greek mythology.. this isn't too original. read some other fanfics for ideas.
7/10
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James Kinsella
1:24 am | April 17, 2003
Good idea, but kinda boring. I hope you'll spend a little more time on the next one's title.
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Havok
1:19 am | April 17, 2003
good idea and plot, but chapters gotta be longer. and post them one at a time.
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Red
8:26 pm | April 16, 2003
This one have a title?
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