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Comments for 'JOY RIDE'



Halo Master Dawg
8:51 pm | April 4, 2003
Sorry it was confusing but I am not going to write anymore stories since yall think they are crap.
Matt
2:04 pm | April 4, 2003
Is this a comedy?! If it was that helps save your reputation thus far a little.

If it wasn't ..... Jesus Chr.... what the hell!
You have no idea what you are talking about, i don't even want to read the rest of it, but oh-well nobodys perfect!
Traumatised Marine
6:41 am | April 4, 2003
It sounds like you assigned yourself a few Halo names and set out to write a mildly Sci-Fi story.

Certainly pointless, yet I couldn't help but finish reading it... funny that.
Mr. Bill
5:42 am | April 4, 2003
They call it peaches and cream.

I must say, you've got one thing down very well: Getting to the point! Though I must agree, I wonder what is going on, and, heck, I really didn't understand any of it, it was concise!
Halo Master Dawg
8:40 pm | April 3, 2003
I kinda think it stunk too. I am just getting used to write Fan Fiction. That was my second story I've written so far.
James Kinsella
2:06 pm | April 3, 2003
Kinda pointless i guess but whatever. The wazzup was stupid and spelling could be better. Keep working on it though.


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