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Comments for 'Long time gone part 3' |
Alpha Lance
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
This remides me of a Clacy novel I read one time
with the swearing and all,9.5/10.
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grylsy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
well you know soliders dont talk all polite to each other, you dont see many soldiers saying "hmm that guy was a good shot" when they get shot or something, i added the swearing for some atmosphere....
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Jambun
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
No offense but it was a bit random could be a bit more action. Try and make a sniping like 18 rs waiting for a jackal whateva but still thumbs up :D
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motorhead
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
hey that was a great story, great writing, put some more up
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grylsy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
i'm kind of not nito writing stories right now.... playing cs and diablo online but i might fininsh 'the ghosts' and put up anoither part to this series tonight....
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