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Comments for 'In the end [short but good]' |
gruntkiller
7:15 pm | April 29, 2003
hey are you copying my name?
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Grunt Killer
10:44 pm | April 25, 2003
It was a very good story. But, Where did Maste r Chief go when he left? You should have put the Master Chief in the story more. Sweet story. Keep it up.
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James Kinsella
9:48 pm | April 25, 2003
I would give it a seven out of ten, but the grammar was kind of apalling. I suggest that next time you send your work to a friend to have them read it over. Keep it up.
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Steele
7:55 pm | April 25, 2003
7/10.
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