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Comments for 'Fallen Angel: Part 5: Chase' |
gruntkiller
12:33 pm | January 29, 2003
ill try to put more time into the diologue in the future, thanks everyone the next one should be ready in a day or two
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Sarge
10:11 pm | January 28, 2003
For some reason The Josh sounds funny because one of the ppl I know calls himself The Mike. Anyway some of the dialogue in this chapter seemed kinda uh you know what I'm getting at? Still good though.
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gruntkiller
9:53 pm | January 28, 2003
good to see your not dead :)
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gruntkiller
12:38 pm | January 28, 2003
next chapter is full of it
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Sarge
2:30 am | January 28, 2003
Yes i'm alive just took a little two day trip off I'll read this tomorrow promise ;-)
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Bean
2:35 am | January 27, 2003
I was too busy playing splinter cell,anyway your story was great!(some action please)!
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gruntkiller
4:25 pm | January 26, 2003
thanks diablo
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el_halo_diablo
1:45 am | January 26, 2003
I don't know what has happened to HBO fan fiction lately...almost no one is commenting, or mabye in that case, reading. np gruntkiller, i'll give a comment anytime...unless i have to hands to write with...but you get the point.
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gruntkiller
11:28 pm | January 25, 2003
theres a real dry spout in responses this chapters been here for 3 days and only el halo diablo has responded to it thanks el halo please anybody who reads the story please respond to it i don't care if its a simple commen t like it was good and it sucked (if you thought it sucked it would realy help me to know why) so please respond authors lov to read what other ppl thought of their work (well at least i do)
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el_halo_diablo
11:44 pm | January 24, 2003
ahhhhhhhhhh, now I see. Thanks
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grutnkiller
8:19 pm | January 24, 2003
the last bit was figurative meaning it all just turned for the worse
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el_halo_diablo
9:22 pm | January 23, 2003
nice work, but um: "From outside through the punctured airlock door a bright white light flows through causing everyone to squint the **** just hit the fan." are you saying that something hit the fan? and what fan? Can you articulate on this point?
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