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Comments for 'Fallen Angel: Part 4: Winds of Doom'



gruntkiller
10:09 pm | January 16, 2003
pamala andersons from canada, :P
el_halo_diablo
9:08 pm | January 16, 2003
Yay final exams just ended today for me :P. I just found out I got 24 out of 40 points possible on my Canada report :C. Oh I asked one multiple choice question to my class: Who is from Canada? a) Winoa Ryder b) Pamela Anderson c) Tom Hanks or d) Saddam Hussien. :D. Keep it up gruntkiller.
gruntkiller
6:51 pm | January 16, 2003
oh its going to be a wild ride i can assure of that and anonymous read the story before you post a comment next time. the next chapter will be slow commin because exams just started and i have to spen a fair bit of time studying. Thanks all for the comments me and Covert have a lot of tricks yet up our sleaves
el_halo_diablo
12:27 pm | January 16, 2003
Gruntlikker, Covert, It seems that you are revving the story up before it takes off on a wild ride(if that makes any since), good job.
NobleWard
4:05 am | January 16, 2003
I really liked some of the dialogue between Kelly and Josh near the end. But, it seems kinda rushed. At least in my mind. But otherwise I like the premise of the entire story so far. Keep it up.
Lord Prozen
11:12 pm | January 15, 2003
Dear Anonymous,

I have been seeing that you are posting the same shit over and over again.

Please read the story or shut up.
Anonymous
11:12 pm | January 15, 2003
THIS STORY SUCKS!!!

IT USES TOO MANY GOD DAMNED WORDS!!!
gruntkiller
6:58 pm | January 15, 2003
the next will be longer
Bean
1:30 am | January 15, 2003
pretty good but it's too dam short!
gruntkiller
9:29 pm | January 14, 2003
thanks wado
Wado
9:18 pm | January 14, 2003
nice job, keep it up.


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