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Comments for 'Fallen Angel: Part 1 Reunion' |
gruntkiller
6:21 pm | June 3, 2003
i never saw the movie so i cint say i did that unpurposly
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CaNaDiAn BaCoN
9:34 pm | May 4, 2003
Skin tight black suits, Metal chairs, metal beds, X Men Anyone?
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gruntkiller
7:23 pm | December 24, 2002
good news i just finished Fallen angel part 2, all that is left is to send it to covert for his opinion and changes, with any luck it should be sent in by friday
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gruntkiller
10:21 pm | December 21, 2002
thank you everyone the next chapter should be ready by friday if everything goes smoothly. im glad you guys are enjoying the series, me and covert have a lot of great ideas so be patient it may take a long time to write but i can almost assure you that it will turn out to be great
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Flood impalor
5:35 pm | December 21, 2002
Im back agian. i just finished reading it for the second time. i love the way elites torture their victems
its just original. and the truth drawer.... VERY ORIGINAL.continue on ill continue to read. any one who read my old series that was two puny chapters. its gone, old, rotten, moldy. i have a new one on the way. but ya, excellent work. and sarge is right. dont interogate him for no reason, enless its a new sport on the covenant home world. lol
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MC Hammer
5:19 pm | December 21, 2002
Cool beginning. I like the action of the beginning with the death of MasterChief. Just what will happened next?(I'll wait till next chapter, u got me hooked) Well written.
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Covert
12:08 pm | December 21, 2002
Very nice work. You could have left sam out of the story a bit longer though (for suspense stuff).
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Guilty Spark
7:16 am | December 21, 2002
Very good. The only thing I would not do is name your next chapter (especially if it is a spoiler for what's to come). Instead, end a chapter in such a way that it hints that there is more to come, but leave the reader wanting to know what it is.
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el_halo_diablo
10:00 pm | December 20, 2002
wow, I think you and covert really hit it off.
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Sarge
4:54 pm | December 20, 2002
Wait, the "Thruth Drawer" didn't draw any thruth it just killed him. LOL that made no sense. HOwever, your grammar and spelling have improved greatly and the idea is original.
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