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Comments for 'The Beginning' |
Anonymous
6:59 am | May 24, 2004
ecard adult
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duckfoot
4:07 pm | November 3, 2003
Mainevent-
Sounds good to me!
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Mainevent
9:18 pm | October 31, 2003
By all means continue.
So many people only write to see the reactions, but I usually try to write for myself, and then, I if I think I got something good, I'll try to show it off.
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Dispraiser
7:39 pm | October 31, 2003
I don't see why not. Also, I understand the purpose of the list.
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Duckfoot himself...
3:29 pm | October 31, 2003
Should I continue this story? If anyone is interested, please post comments.
Also, If I do continue it, the long list is only for reference, and you do not have to read it all.
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Mainevent
4:16 am | October 31, 2003
I'm a total idiot please kill me i admit im a teenager who insults people for fun hehe!!!
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Dispraiser
1:05 am | October 31, 2003
VERY short. Nt a fan of that myself, but it made it easier on me, so I'm not gonna bitch you out for it.
Anyways, this one gets a flackfic of three. Pace changes a lot and there is some general flow errors that needed ot get paved out. The speed wasn't too steady, see, and I really ahted that LOOOONG list of people.
I marked you down a tilt point, a wording point (w little too simplistic) and took another for the fun of it. This fanfic wasn't as good as the twos i give out.
Wondeirng what your review means?
http://dispraiser.tripod.com/flackfic.htm
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