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Comments for '5 Way War Part V: The Trip' |
ROONEY
2:22 pm | October 6, 2003
I TINK ENDAS GAME WUZ KOOL
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ROONEYIHJWFCHELVJDHNXMCCX
2:22 pm | October 6, 2003
I ST
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Shinana
2:22 pm | October 6, 2003
Yall be quiet
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Shiniqua
2:20 pm | October 6, 2003
Enders game sucks
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Shiniqua
2:20 pm | October 6, 2003
Enders game sucks
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Demosthenes
4:25 pm | March 8, 2003
About what Locke said, I thnk we should compliment the story if we liked it, but also point out any mistakes. Mistakes help us authors not make mistakes the next time, and compliments help give us support and let us know that people ACTUALLY APRECIATE and enjoyed out stories. Thanks for all you support folks
Demosthenes
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Locke
11:15 pm | March 1, 2003
So it's true! Anonymous and Dispraiser are the same person! Also, i can understand how pointing out certain errors, such as sentence flow would help you,(so you could fix it on the next story) but honestly, what good can pointing out a typo do? The story is already posted, you can't change it! And when i said i had no intelegent people reading my series anymore, i didn't mean i had negative feedback! Just like you said, the people who don't point out anything are the idiots. I meant i didn't have anyone pointing out anything!
And also, simply giving a compliment and not pointing out anything DOES GIVE YOU SUPPORT! It's always nice to know how many people actually read an aprreciate your storys.
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Demosthenes
3:17 am | March 1, 2003
I'm going to resend it. There's no way they are going to stop posting my story in the middle of it.
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Anonymous
10:18 pm | February 28, 2003
Locke, idiots only post the positive feedback. I can have nintey people say "Great fanfics, I liked it", and those will serve me no purpose, but if one person points out even a typo they have helped more than those ninety people. I had no idea I complained that much...
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Bean
5:01 pm | February 22, 2003
Hey Demo weren't you listening,Louis isn't taking any fanfics till the 26th!
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Demosthenes
3:24 pm | February 21, 2003
I've just sent the last part of 5 way War. From now on its 6 Way War. Just thought you should know.
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Demosthenes
3:17 am | February 8, 2003
Dispraiser I was joking on that last one, you don't complain THAT MUCH! but you do focus alot on negative stuff. I mean your name, Dispraiser, means a person who does not praise. Just joking on the last one. I thought I had to put that in. Anyhow, I'm giving up on that quote thing, it was stupid. But hey, those were funny quotes right? Also thanks Ender, that's cool. You should read Locke's it's pretty cool. Also I found out a little bit about who Locke really is, besides Peter I mean. He was a famous British Philospher, I think, or else he's a famous British something. Anyhow thanks for reading ya'll (I don't have that kind of accent) And peace guys. See ya!
- Demosthenes
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Locke
11:42 pm | February 6, 2003
Also, dispraiser, not that it's a bad thing, but yes you do complain that much. You useally focus on the negative, but that's OK because people know where to improve that way. Also please read my series! Like i said earlier i want more feedback from intelegent people!
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Locke
11:37 pm | February 6, 2003
Ender! Don't You know who Locke is? I from Ender series to! Read my series Ring Of The Forerunners.
I could use some people reading my story who apreciate OCS!
Also has anyone here read Children of the Mind? (Fourth in the Ender series). Peter rocked in that one, man!
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Dispraiser
3:33 am | February 6, 2003
I complain that much?
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Ender
2:12 am | February 5, 2003
HA!!! THE WORLD IS MINE!!! THISHAS TO BE MY MOST FAVORITE FAN FIC OUT THERE, CAUSE ITS WRITER HAS A SWEET NAME!!! KEEP WRITING!!
-Ender
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Spear of Destiny
12:40 pm | February 4, 2003
I like the music-language part, that's cool. You did a goodjob, Deomosthenes.
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Demosthenes
2:03 am | February 4, 2003
Dispraiser doesn't have a complaint
OH MY @#^$%&*(@#! GOD!!!!! THATS THE MOST AMAZING THING I EVER SAW!!!!
(hehehe)
-Demosthenes
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Demosthenes
9:20 pm | February 3, 2003
I know, I'm going to have a battle with the Itenerants, but noone has noticed I haven't used 343 in a while. But of course thats the first thing in the next part. the covenant are carrying out another battle with where they kill a monitor dude. And the language isn't music, it just sounds like it. It even said an ORchestra of a language. It's the original prophets language, but the Priests speak it to because, their the ONLY ONES WHO CAN! it's not the priests and prophets, it's both. Have either of you read the sneak preview for 6 Way War? You should it's pretty good.
-Demosthenes
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Dispraiser
10:21 pm | February 2, 2003
A music language... That's sweet man... Again, nice work, no complaints here...
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Locke
6:15 pm | February 2, 2003
Amazing once more, Deomosthenes! I like your idea of the Prophets and Priests having a music-like language. Also what happened to the Itinerants? They were really cool, but you haven't mentioned them in a while.
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