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Comments for 'Mutant Chronicles : A New worrior' |
Kaboose
11:51 am | August 16, 2003
I want it to continue, but i'm just recommending that you run it through a spellcheck before you submit it..it was a good story...you've got a pretty good start, so finish it!
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Ishkabibbl
12:38 am | August 16, 2003
I got the same thing, but your title was spelt wrong.
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CrazyIvan2X
7:44 pm | August 15, 2003
do you want the story to go on
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Bloodcider
11:17 am | August 15, 2003
I believe they sent in ground teams to obtain information on earth. Then they glassed the place.
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Dark Spartan
2:13 am | August 15, 2003
Pretty good but needs grammar checking. Try to use the same verb tenses and don't go into different times... like past and then suddenly present and back again. 7/10
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monitor101
8:09 pm | August 14, 2003
Pretty cool man it ends on a cliff hanger. Now didn't the Covenant glass Reach?
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Kaboose
12:12 pm | August 14, 2003
It was good...but there were a lot of errors in it...try to run it through a spell-check before you submit it...and it wasa little short...but besides that, it was a good story. Pretty funny how you made Sergeant johnson (Sarge) yell when Jameson was apply medicine to his wound.
8.5/10
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