Comments for 'The Chronicles of Eternity: Humanity and The Halos Chapter 1'
gruntkiller
3:09 pm | June 22, 2003
very good and very interesting a couple of quewstions though. if the serians were so powerful why wouldnt they just roll over the covenant the way you made it seem it was almost like they were uninterested. very good story lots of potential. almost spunds like a story wado would write (which is very good)
Wiley K.
11:02 am | June 21, 2003
Pretty cool concepty you've got here. Story has potential. 9/10
