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Comments for 'The Tides of War Part 1 "As the Dust Cleared" Chapter 2'



Corbantis
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Thanks!CH 3 is C'mon
craZy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Better stuff then what I could make. Keep it up!
vector40
12:01 am | November 30, -0001

Mwahaha...

Nice one! Good flow, healthy descriptions, sharp action...

I'd accompany them down :)

-v



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