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Comments for 'Everyone Dies' |
JJiggssaw
9:04 pm | February 25, 2004
I dunno the right side of my brain says that it should be funny while the left argues that it is sad. Its ok but don't quit the day job [writing really good fan fiction ;)]
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teemus
2:35 am | December 5, 2003
Great Poem. I loved it, Pleanty of emotion.
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CoLd BlooDed
7:50 pm | November 30, 2003
I know I said I'm not very good at poems lol, or at least these ones. I didn't really put much effort into this one, just felt like doing it because I was bored. I'll try doing another ABAB, but better.
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Jamirus99
7:48 pm | November 30, 2003
Not really ABAB, but okay nonetheless.
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Mainevent
12:49 pm | November 25, 2003
I sent mine in, but forgot to give it to Hunter_Killer, so I kinda messed it all up.
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CoLd BlooDed
2:42 am | November 25, 2003
Gracias tanto Mainevent. Did you manage to send in your part of the story? I was going to do some of mine tonight but I was going to write another chapter of Fight for New Tatley.
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Mainevent
2:33 am | November 25, 2003
Muy Bien.
Su poema es muy bonita.
Me gusta mucho a leerla.
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Blood Lust_HaloPc
1:32 am | November 25, 2003
Dude again u pleased me with ur poem and it made me feel kinda relaxed.
If u keeps this up. Ill have more homework to do with ur story.
Awsome shit dude make more so i can read it.
U good at this man i really like it.
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Steele
1:20 am | November 25, 2003
DEEEEP poem, man. *Grabs a boxes of tissues* Kee-sob-it-sob-up.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:39 pm | November 24, 2003
I thank you guys VERY much, I also noticed that hornet lol. I'll try to improve on the next poem.
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hornet34
10:59 pm | November 24, 2003
Its good. Your meter is a little off, but that didn't hurt the message or the emotion in the poem. Keep it up.
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Walker
10:43 pm | November 24, 2003
Bee-yoo-tee-ful, man. Makes me cry. *Sniff*
Semper Fi
-Walker
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CoLd BlooDed
3:42 pm | November 24, 2003
Sorry I'm not that good at making poems for anyone that reads this.
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