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Comments for 'Counterstrike Chapter 1' |
Hawk7886
6:08 am | December 31, 2003
Cool. I like the personalities you've put on your characters. Very believable.
However, you didn't capitalize the ranks. Ranks like Sergeant and Lieutenent need to be capitalized.
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LordofDestruction
4:59 am | December 30, 2003
7.5/10. You need to italicize ship names. By the way, my grading scale is fairly harsh
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Helljumper
4:11 pm | December 28, 2003
read my newest story "A short story: Mathew's tale " and leave a comment.
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Alpha Lance
1:52 am | December 28, 2003
Please use the code.
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Anonymous
8:46 pm | December 27, 2003
Good start, please don't make it cheasy and use all the arsenals of an army like, mines, tanks, artilery, etc... Hell make up some or add mechs. too . Thx keep up the good work.
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Helljumper
11:39 pm | December 26, 2003
good one, some grammer mistakes, but then again so do my stories. i give it 8/10 keep it up
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