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Comments for 'Covenant Processing Laboratory' |
Guardian
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
What the Hell was that, no usage of code at all, completely confusing, major grammatic errors, and no story line to follow through with this fiction.
A grunt creates a brand new force for the Covenant. what the hell is a pharoh, there are no pharoh's in the Covenant on the highest religious cast.
4/10
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343 Salty Beans
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
What Guardian said. Get your backstory right before you write something.
343SB
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Young Gunna
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Horrible... 1/10 You get a 1 for writing something. Simple sentences made the thing boring as well.
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Severian
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I suggest you wait til' you finish middle school english classes.
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Nick Kang
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
*Shakes head wisely*
I will point out a few things.
1. Prophets not Pharohs.
2. Wally? Blob? Read the Halo books to figure out what kind if names Grunts have.
NK
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Dave Luck
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Read the Guidelines. They were there for a reason.
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EtTu,Brute?
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Covenant are not created, they were mostly conquered and forced to join.
Covenant use grav beams and holo panels.
Foehammer died a terrible, terrible death (places flowers at memorial)
Other than that, it's somewhat humorous.
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russ687
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
"Serious story or comedy?" I was wondering this the whole time. I understand if your writing is a bit...hazy, but there is no (and I mean NO) excuse for not proof-reading. If you will put in the time and *ehem* effort to write it, do the same and make it readable!
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Mastergrunt
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
What ever hopes you had of making fans are now officially obliterated.
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hunter_that_dances
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
man, show some encouragement for the guy, dammit
as for you, use the code. itll help u a LOT
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hunter_that_dances
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
man, show some encouragement for the guy, dammit
as for you, use the code. itll help u a LOT
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Brutey
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Myself, as the author is taking your advice. The 'Prophets ' not 'Pharoah' mistake I understand as it's the my first time in writing the story! I deeply admire the game Halo: Combat Evolved and your fiction but it will hopefully improve next time!
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