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Comments for 'Halo Poetry 101: Killing Stuff' |
Mainevent
9:47 pm | November 6, 2003
Sorry bout that earlier, i know that my message wasn't too long.
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Why won't it work damnit!
12:47 pm | November 6, 2003
I'll try to help you out here so you can make your next one better.
In the futre, a great warrior was born,
Built to kill, with no room to mourn.
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Mainevent
12:45 pm | November 6, 2003
I'll try to help you out here so you can make your next one better.
In the futre, a great warrior was born,
Built to kill, with no room to mourn.
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It shortened my stuff...
12:45 pm | November 6, 2003
I'll try to help you out here so you can make your next one better.
In the futre, a great warrior was born,
Built to kill, with no room to mourn.
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Mainevent
12:35 pm | November 6, 2003
I'll try to help you out here so you can make your next one better.
In the futre, a great warrior was born,
Built to kill, with no room to mourn.
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Walker
4:00 am | November 5, 2003
Mmhmm.
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Alpha Lance
3:54 am | November 5, 2003
Yeah, well the main point is, if you got nothing good to say, then don't say it at all. And, it pisses me off when other people put down other writers hard work. At the top of the fan fic page it say, “all content is the responsibility of the respective author.” Its sad, good writers don't get the respect they should have.
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Walker
11:48 pm | November 4, 2003
Yeah, she spelled goddess right, but that wasn't my point.
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Alpha Lance
11:24 pm | November 4, 2003
Yes, I agree with Walker. Beside, poems don't have to rhyme all the time. Goddess, don't try to tell someone how terrible they are in English when you not so good yourself. And I do believe she spell goddess right Walker. Now to the poem, it was great, and yeah, the rhyming was totally there. Could have been a longer poem. Also, check out some other people's poems, here are the ones I recommended:
Walker
Gasmask
TheRambler
Alpha Lance (me)
Mainevent
The Chalk
Good luck in the future, Alpha Lance.
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Walker
10:18 pm | November 4, 2003
Don't listen to her. Girls don't usually go for much in the Halo subject. Yes, I just discrminated. Got a problem with that, "godess"? It's interesting when someone who can't even capitalize their own name tries to teach you about grammar. This was darn good, there were few to no spelling or grammar errors, the rhyming was a little TOO perfect. Good debut as an author--I think you're new, you haven't been here the months I have. 9/10. Hope to see more.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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goddess_of_halo
9:29 pm | November 4, 2003
Try again. Obviously you didn't pass high school English. The spelling is terrible, the rhyming is off, to say the least. Oh well.
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