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Comments for 'Halo: Raid in Capabin' |
Helljumper
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
A Pelican can't hold 25 Marines.
ODST
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Pho
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
WHOA. the whole brother thing caught me off-guard...pretty good story. dialogue was a lil cluttered, but it's cool.
i give it a 8.5/10.
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Red Ghost
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Umm...that was interesting. Yeah, the brother thing was a "What?/Wow!" thing. A DMX? The rapper?
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Severian
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
It could be a lot better... still, better than half of the first attempts.
God to www.sfwa.org. read the writing how-to's there. it's helped my students (I tutor english for some money) some.
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Dave Luck
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Being new is not an excuse for not reading the guidelines!
When will they ever learn?
- Dave.
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