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Comments for 'The Adventure of Monitior 090 (comedy)' |
Sentinel
1:10 am | April 3, 2004
It's really 3rd out of fifteen. And how did it become January to March on my last post. It's all going by too fast.
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Sentinel
12:18 pm | March 8, 2004
Actually, this is only 3rd best. I don't read many comedies.
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Awacar
10:57 am | March 8, 2004
Ah, that's ok, Sentinel, it was made in a hour, and with SOOO much effort involved, so I can understand you.
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Sentinel
3:58 am | January 17, 2004
And I'm not lying either.
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Awacar
8:55 am | January 11, 2004
Seriously????
Thanks Sentinel.
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Sentinel
2:42 am | January 9, 2004
.........Great job. One of the best comedies I've ever read.
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One_Shot_One_Kill
3:24 pm | January 5, 2004
Funny. Its amazing how a simple change of words can make you laugh. not the best comedy, but still funny. 8/10
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Rogue_spartan
12:22 pm | December 31, 2003
Grrrrr!!!
SOMEONEFROMYOURSCHOOL stop trying to be cool.
your a freaking [b]HOMO[/b]
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Awacar
10:30 am | December 31, 2003
Hey, rogue, your last post rhymes! Some spammer is nothing to get angry about, think about it, he is probably a very miserable person.
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Awacar
9:18 am | December 30, 2003
Always funny to see spammers and people that don't read stories that tries to post. I can accept that you cant find anywhere to post, and don't have the courage to write a story, I can even accept your critisism, but not the way you write it. Also, if you're going to be thrust-worthy, please change that name sometime, I've seen you around for the last few days, and change to something better. (Atleast, only capitalize the first letter of your name.)
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SOMEONEFROMYOURSCHOOL
5:42 am | December 30, 2003
AM THAT WAS NOT FUNNY 1 bit you mother fucker
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Awacar
11:57 pm | December 29, 2003
It's okay, rogue, the fic wasn't (that) funny, and overall, the posts are positive, so I'm happy.
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rogue_spartan
11:48 pm | December 29, 2003
you guys have no class
lets see you make a comedy.
ill be the first one to bash it.
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Awacar
10:32 pm | December 29, 2003
In my eyes, many, but it still was something diferent
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witelancer
6:45 pm | December 29, 2003
agh! that was good... way to interject some humor into the insane monitor's ramblings.. i liked it.
-9/10 (few parts were lacking in humor)
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witelancer
6:45 pm | December 29, 2003
agh! that was good... way to interject some humor into the insane monitor's ramblings.. i liked it.
-9/10 (few parts were lacking in humor)
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CoLd BlooDed
2:37 am | December 29, 2003
I don't know but I still thought it was clever mostly because you translated what he said in the transcripts to a candy theivery.
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Awacar
10:12 pm | December 28, 2003
In reply to CoLd:
Sorry about the title. I think I will have to change the labeling, it looks horrible with that label on it.
And how clever is it to just exchange a few words from the level transcripts? Childs play.
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CoLd BlooDed
7:39 pm | December 28, 2003
I didn't think it was that funny but I did think it was pretty clever. Good work but next time I don't think you should label it a comedy.
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Awacar
9:51 am | December 27, 2003
In reply to Dispraiser:
"...as you seem to have some skill at using 343s vernacular." I don't know if it should be called skill, since i just exchanged index for money/candy and Reclaimer for customer, after checking the level transcripts on Library and Two Betrayals. But you sure put an idea in my head there, Dispraiser.
Because I wrote this, I must agree with Alpha Lance.
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Dispraiser
5:24 am | December 27, 2003
Not laugh out loud funny, but certainly not bad. You might also want to consider writing a serious story about the forerunner and Monitors, as you seem to have some skill at using 343s vernacular.
You also reminded me of my favorite quote from 343, the one about what he asked him last time, ect. I love that one...
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Alpha Lance
3:53 am | December 27, 2003
My honest opinion is that it wasn't really funny at all. But you gave it your best try, I give that. I tried comedy once and it failed in a fiery explosion. Well, good luck next time.
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teemus
2:06 am | December 27, 2003
I agree with Kyre.
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Awacar
8:46 pm | December 26, 2003
You seem to like it, unless I take a check at the HBO story page, I don't. But when I compare the 090 quotes with the ones of 343, I think that it gets quite funny.
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Mainevent
5:42 pm | December 26, 2003
Oh Monitor, you so crazy.
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rogue_spartan
2:39 pm | December 26, 2003
I likey.
I hate that trecherous little blue orb,
he deserves to be humiliated.
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Kyre
12:09 pm | December 26, 2003
Quite funny, I liked it...
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