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Comments for 'Eternal War: Chapter 1: Threatened'



Sentinel
4:37 am | April 3, 2004
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Awacar
1:54 pm | January 29, 2004
Of course I will. :)
CoLd BlooDed
4:52 am | January 29, 2004
And thanks for posting on my story as well.

If you keep up with the rest of my series I'll keep up with the rest of yours. :P
Awacar
2:19 pm | January 28, 2004
That's perfectly okay.
CoLd BlooDed
11:55 pm | January 27, 2004
Sorry 'bout the double post...
CoLd BlooDed
1:25 am | January 27, 2004
I have a comment.

It was very well written, in fact it was greatly written. I liked how in the first chapter you already proposed a conflict and there was some action in there as well.

I also like the fact that this is from the Forerunner's point of view.

8/10, great story, keep it up!

P.S - Once my story, titled "Forced Betrayal", is posted on HBO, do you think you could read it? My last chapter didn't get many good reviews, thanks.
CoLd BlooDed
1:25 am | January 27, 2004
I have a comment.

It was very well written, in fact it was greatly written. I liked how in the first chapter you already proposed a conflict and there was some action in there as well.

I also like the fact that this is from the Forerunner's point of view.

8/10, great story, keep it up!

P.S - Once my story, titled "Forced Betrayal", is posted on HBO, do you think you could read it? My last chapter didn't get many good reviews, thanks.
Awacar
7:32 am | January 24, 2004
Hey! No comment? :(


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