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Comments for 'Corporal Barnes and Corporal Smith; A Marine's Tale part 3, the FINALE (sad)' |
Nick Kang
2:56 pm | June 13, 2004
You just said it isn't about Halo.
And 'ass hole' is one word, you asshole.
NK
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twinkie
2:00 pm | June 13, 2004
What if it is about halo ass hole
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Nick Kang
12:20 pm | June 13, 2004
You must be retarded. Why do you think this site is called halo.bungie.org? The key word there being 'HALO'. The fiction is SUPPOSED to be about Halo. They aren't gonna post it if it isn't.
NK
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twinkie
12:16 am | June 13, 2004
NO NO NO!!!!! THAT STORY ISNT EVEN ABOUT HALO! IM TRYING TO BRING SOMETHING DIFFERENT TO U GUYS! IF U DONT BELEIVE ME, READ THE DANG THING WHEN IT COMES OUT!!!
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The NEW Zak
6:45 pm | June 12, 2004
why dont you ask him
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Nick Kang
3:45 pm | June 12, 2004
How could the Blue Monkey be based off a true story if it's on a video game/
NK
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The NEW Zak
2:11 pm | June 12, 2004
GOD! YOU PEOPLE ARE STUPID! I WOULD NEVER SINK AS LOW AS TO IMPERSONATE SOMEONE! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO TWINKIE IS! GOD!
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Nick Kang
12:14 pm | June 12, 2004
First of all...shut up Zak.
Second of all...the way you spell faggot. Same way as my impersonator a few months ago...anyone see a coincidence?
NK
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twinkie
8:00 pm | June 11, 2004
Sorry! But i dont know when they will post my story the blue monkey! But when they do, u have 2 read it!
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twinkie
7:28 pm | June 11, 2004
YES IT IS TRUE. MY STORY CALLED "THE BLUE MONKEY" IS DONE!!! GO AHEAD AND ENJOY IT!!!
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twinkie
4:15 pm | June 11, 2004
Yo peoples. How u doing? My name is twinkie! If you want to see my work of making fun of, or just talking to people, go 2 PART 2 of this series! Oh, and the mainevent is a FAGET!!!! Im currently writing a story called THE BLUE MONKEY! Its based on a true story. Until then, u can see me in PART 2 of this series!
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Nick Kang
12:52 pm | June 11, 2004
I think this story ended a bit too quickly, but hey, it's your FanFic. I think a good title for your new story would be:
'Bravo Team: Fight for Her'
or something like that.
NK
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romac1991
7:48 am | June 11, 2004
your story sounds great Zak!
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romac1991
7:48 am | June 11, 2004
I posted my third story called Interrogation, make sure to check it out when they post it.
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Snake Solid 117
4:51 am | June 11, 2004
Sorry to post twice, but i had an idea. How about 'When we lost our grasp, and Reach' I don't know, hmm, not syre. Well, luck with the title.
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Snake Solid 117
4:08 am | June 11, 2004
How about just cutting off the 'Halo' in your title, that might be better.
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Mister Chief 117
3:12 am | June 11, 2004
Too long, and sounds like a ripoff.
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The NEW Zak
10:28 pm | June 10, 2004
My next story will be a Single Story, and it's title will be Halo: The Fall of Reach:A Marine's Story of Survival. What do you think?
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The NEW Zak
2:22 pm | June 10, 2004
thanks Romac1991, i wont stop writing.
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Mainevent
4:28 am | June 10, 2004
A very short story, that would probably have benefitted by the addition of multiple paragraphs.
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Snake Solid 117
4:03 am | June 10, 2004
I read your stories. I don't post becaus eof time constraints, and i usually do it in school. Anyway, pretty cool. Kind of wierd how he kill sthe elite, and the guys are just raoming around the ship, but hey, what the hell. At the end though, hmmm, not sure. Seems like you kinda rushed it. Take your time. I have been working on my story for a helluva long time, and i haven't posted it yet. Take your time, but, unlike me, turn it in.
I don't want to sound like i'm preaching, so sorry if i did. Good job though, take your time and write us another Fan Fic. Good Luck.
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romac1991
3:00 am | June 10, 2004
Zak, dont quit writing, your storys have potential, I read your Marines Tale Series and it was lacking a few things, like the code, but when you submit fan fiction on one of the pages it has a link for fan fiction tips that shows the wonderful secrets of writing. And you sure as hell shouldn't listen to Hawk7886, because his ass hasn't turned out a story in his whole damn life so I dont know why he does stuff like putting people down like that he is probaly insecure of something or having family problems. But dont let some sorry excuse for a human being to make you quit writing great story's. Bottom line, no one but that fag wants you to stop writing, just try and use the code and it'll be all good.
romac
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The NEW Zak
1:01 am | June 10, 2004
im not going to write anymore stories for awhile, ill just stick to reading them, i know some of you are probably cheering, but i would just like to take the time to thank anyone who even bothered to read my stories, except Hawk7886. So thanks, ill be back someday..........
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