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Comments for 'Athenienses-II: Chapter 4 : Pay Back Time' |
Awacar
6:47 pm | January 8, 2004
Good, just a little short, and aren't the Covies a little harder to kill? Maybe I've got something wrong, but they still seem a little too easy to kill. Good battlescene, detailed and well written.
(*snivel* I was about to write a chapter named Pay back time.*snivels some more*)
Good work, maybe add a little more proofreading, but elseway it isn't much to complain about. Keep it up!
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