Comments for 'Effusion - Prologue'

Nice to see you back at it :)

And yes, it's a tad confusing. The dialogue-centric writing is interesting, but after a while one gets completely lost as to who is talking. Some anchors would help.

Oh, and - one brief thing. Do you know how to do m-dashes? Most word processors can handle them - they're long dashes, the kind that you use to separate pieces of a sentence. On a Mac you press option+shift+dash - on a PC, I'm not sure. Newer versions of Word do it automatically, if you type two dashes and then keep writing without putting a space or stopping - it'll form them together automatically.

I ramble about this only because they're easier to read than any compromise with ordinary dashes... and Louis can code them, too. Give it a try, they're nice.

Anyway. Nice work, as usual :) Good to know that the Tursas machine is still as strange and warped as ever.

-veccy