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Comments for 'Human Elite Ch 3'



Sentinel
11:10 pm | November 28, 2003
nice.Very nice
MasterGrunt
11:51 am | October 23, 2003
LoL. A grunt as second in command
Anonymous
10:42 pm | October 21, 2003
Don'r listen to Hawk7886. I just finshed the reading the chapters,they're great. Keep them coming.
kobra41
7:39 pm | October 20, 2003
wow, i really like the chapters. It really hooks on to you and won't let go, i cant wait until you finish the next chapter!!
Mainevent
5:49 pm | October 19, 2003
"The object of war isn't for you to die for your country, it's to make the dumb fuck on the otherside die for his."
Master_Chief189
3:03 pm | October 19, 2003
9/10
Hawk7886
6:57 am | October 19, 2003
I do not believe in releasing multiple chapters before getting feedback on past ones. You forgot to capitalize the races: Elite, Hunter, Grunt, and Jakal.

My advice: Get feedback on previous chapters before submitting the next one. If you know what mistakes you made, you know not to make them again.

6/10

P.S. I always heard the quote as, "You don't want to die for your country, you want the dumbass next to you to do it for you."


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