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Comments for 'The Offensive Retreat' |
witelancer
6:49 pm | December 1, 2003
ugh. the grammar is terrible... *sighs, puts head down*... but the story is your typical Marine-Covenant ground combat... pretty good, even with the flaws.
just a note: It's Covenant, not "convent"... and using numerals "700"... kind of makes this read like a statistics report.
-6/10
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Dark Armarda
12:49 pm | November 25, 2003
You really need to use some gramma in your writting and use the correct versions of words. For example, your use of the word "there".
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