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Comments for 'Bunker on the Beach' |
Hunter_Killer
9:03 pm | August 23, 2003
Adversisements:
Coming to an HBO near you:
Blue Squadron Chronicles!
Telling the eciting exploits of the UNSC 177th Longsword B Squadron, also known as Blue Quadron!
The Adventures of Lt. Jake! (It's Part Three)
Following the Adventures of a UNSC Pelican Dropship Pilot as he is shot down, rescued, and his flights into Historic(In the future)Battles!
A Sieries of Wierd Events! (Part Two)
Me and other HBO Fan Fic writers are sucked into our Halo Games! Will we ever escape? Or will the Covenant get us...
lol, I do my Advertising.
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Hunter_Killer
9:00 pm | August 23, 2003
I don't indent, either. lol. Spell Jackal right next time, and several other holes. Other than that, interseting story. But too short(lol, me king of short fics!). 8.29/10. =|
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bloodsoldier4
3:12 am | August 22, 2003
its ok i give in a 6 1/2 outa 10 other then that its good
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Walker
1:26 am | August 22, 2003
ah, gotta take the time to advertise...
read my series, "Last of the Walking Dead"!
Imagine waking up after a bloody battle, and discovering that you've been left behind by your own forces, behind enemy lines. How will you escape? Or rather, will you escape?
Read "Last of the Walking Dead" and find out!
(okay, so that was a little cheesy, but i didn't have a lot to work with)
9/10
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FOrunnER
12:43 am | August 22, 2003
Good, I agree with pretty much everbody elses coments, kinda short. I'll give you an 8/10.
P.S., read my new series Spartan III's
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'Nosolee
8:35 pm | August 21, 2003
[indent], story is good, 8.25/10
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Agent Shade
1:57 pm | August 21, 2003
kinda short, space out the paragraphs a bit more, indent, other than that, good job...i'm assuming this isn't a series 8/10
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Tango709
10:44 am | August 21, 2003
8.5/10, and it's marine corps, not core.
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