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monitor101
1:56 am | January 30, 2004
Long, actionized (LOL), good plot, rock on! 10/10 Tel Amir...sounds a lot like Tel Aviv in Isreal.
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CoLd BlooDed
4:12 am | January 29, 2004
Very well written, good action. Keep it up, but what would really make this stand out you would have to use the code.
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FOrunnER
4:41 pm | January 28, 2004
Great story!! It was very acurate with the First Strike and had good action, very nice.
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Person
4:43 am | January 28, 2004
Great story 9/10. Good action. Good plot. Dood setting. Good description.
By the way, my real name is Amir!
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