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Comments for 'Salvation Unlooked For Ch. 01: Journey to Hope' |
SOS.Odin
11:31 am | March 31, 2004
Good job
ill be reading this one
and seargent is spelled sergeant
almost everyone messes that one up
keep writin
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JJiggssaw
11:58 am | March 30, 2004
Lol, Thomas, grammar happnes to me all the time. It's terrible.
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Helljumper
11:27 am | March 30, 2004
You have ODST in ya story so u know i like, don't mess up. i'llbe watching u
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Thomas Harper
1:57 pm | March 27, 2004
the only really bad thing i have to say about this story is ur grammar. i mean it wasnt terrible and it happnes to probably everyone. keep it up. =:)
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The Collector
12:29 pm | March 27, 2004
Not bad a few grammatical erros but otherwise this could lead to a great fanfic
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Nick Kang
9:13 pm | March 26, 2004
Pretty good. Lots of detail. At first it seems like it's just gonna be one of other bad stories that usually populate the fanfic section, but then it gets a lot better.
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