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Comments for 'Gary Young: Chapter 2' |
spectre
12:43 am | May 5, 2004
I was feelin this story though; the " those that should've made it feel". Very cool.
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spectre
10:28 pm | May 4, 2004
If you have any information call the crime line at: 1-800-lock-u-up.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:54 am | May 4, 2004
Can you imagine if he somehow incorporated that into his story?
"Gary walked forward, hearing hard, yet muffled footsteps. He peered around the corner and came face to face with a Knight, he had been warned about these deadly Covenant soldiers. Behind him stepped out two more, then ten, Gary frowned behind his armour. Twenty more stepped out from the doorway, encircling him. Another hundred lined the walkways above. But the largest number - five-hundred-and-sixty-two Knights - stood there and laughed at Gary's incredible ability to count numbers within a millisecond."
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SOS.Odin
3:03 am | May 4, 2004
i just went thru all the comment sections of my past stories and found an anonymous guy posted on a few of em. months after they were written tho. he also said walked recommended em. i feel happy :D. but im wonder who the frick this guy is. HELP ME CATCH THE ANONYMOUS COMMENTER
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SOS.Odin
2:54 am | May 4, 2004
you guys figured it all out already
ugh *lowers head*
now theres no reason for me to continue
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Mainevent
1:08 am | May 4, 2004
Unless Gary somehow makes a treaty with the Knights, and then backstabs them and that's how they all die. And he is the reason they side with the Covenant in Neverland!
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CoLd BlooDed
12:59 am | May 4, 2004
B-but... Gary will *choke* die!
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SOS.Odin
12:32 am | May 4, 2004
ill copy,paste, and put that in there cold :D
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Nick Kang
9:59 pm | May 3, 2004
Or 562! :)
NK
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Mainevent
9:07 pm | May 3, 2004
Or a hundred!
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CoLd BlooDed
3:41 pm | May 3, 2004
Or twenty?
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SOS.Odin
11:06 am | May 3, 2004
lol
all of em eh?
maybe...
im pretty sure he'll fight one
or two
or ten
:D
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Mainevent
10:39 am | May 3, 2004
If there were Knights in Neverland, there had to be Knights in the real battles on Earth and such. Gary could be the guy who sent 'em all to neverland.
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SOS.Odin
4:01 am | May 3, 2004
hmmms
gary vs knights?
maybe...
all i know is how this story will end :D
ill just wing it till then
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Spartn81388
2:40 am | May 3, 2004
I liked it can't wait for the next one.
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CoLd BlooDed
10:24 pm | May 2, 2004
Good stuff, Odin, seemed a bit rushed, but other than that it was good.
Expect the next chapter of The Strive to Survive next update.
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Mainevent
4:30 pm | May 2, 2004
Gary better fight KNIGHTS damn you! Knights!
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SOS.Odin
4:17 pm | May 2, 2004
i agree
this stroy was rushed
boo to the author
the next one better be good :D
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Nick Kang
4:05 pm | May 2, 2004
meh, it was okay. It did rush through everything, no details on any of the training, but I agree, it is hard to make a chapter good when all it's doing is setting up the stage.
NK
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Mainevent
3:32 pm | May 2, 2004
Yea, things did seem rushed. But I can give that free-room because it's setting up the story to come.
Heh, the only cruiser sent to respond. I'd love to be on that SOB.
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Helljumper
3:02 pm | May 2, 2004
it was more like a summary than really a story. there weren't any details about boot camp or infantry training and things seemed rushed.
ODST
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