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Comments for 'Gary Young: A Lucky One?'



SOS.Odin
4:06 am | May 3, 2004
lol
Anonymous
1:10 pm | April 30, 2004
SCREW THAT STUPID STORY!
SOS.Odin
10:01 pm | April 1, 2004
keep tryin diablo
just keep tryin
Flu
2:20 am | April 1, 2004
Looks like Gary will be answering some more questions - eh?

So far so good - if a bit short - even for an intro. Although, you did post two stories this time. I agree with Nick Kang - this had some good detail (*but you know I always want more*) Keep up the good work.
el_halo_diablo
2:00 am | April 1, 2004
Hey i've been trying to submit my last fan fic, and is anyone else having trouble with submitting it, liek when you press the preview submission button, it just sends you back to a blank form?
SOS.Odin
8:54 pm | March 31, 2004
for anyone who wants to know
i got this coming up week off for spring break
and i wont have access to a comp cuz ill be at
my moms and she dosent have one
so no more writin or commentin or anything from SOS.Odin after thursday till two mondays after that have fun folks
Hell Starter
11:49 am | March 31, 2004
I liked it! Very orderly! Just to say though you kinda half way copied it from the first book, but hey thats kewl. You didnt copy anything, just took the idea. I liked it though. I would just like to say that for anyone that needs help editing their story, I will be glad to help them with that, email me at, hot_playa_28@hotmail.com
SOS.Odin
11:00 am | March 31, 2004
this is just the intro bro
sry bout the boringnessismesqueness of the story
but itll get much better


if anyone wants to read :(
MasterCD
8:42 am | March 31, 2004
It certainly gets your attention. I now want to know what happens next..... The skill of a good writer!
CoLd BlooDed
12:18 am | March 31, 2004
I really liked it, the rocks, paper, scissors game--for some really odd reason--was exciting, guess Gary needs to answer some questions.

Good idea you got goin' here, keep it up, Odin!
SOS.Odin
12:00 am | March 31, 2004
its not gonna be like the first book
this is about one of the kids that qualified
for the Spartan program but wasnt one of the
chosen few to participate in it
Nick Kang
8:40 pm | March 30, 2004
Pretty Good. Somewhat boring, but lots of detail.


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