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Comments for 'On A Pale Horse: The Reverence' |
Wuxer
4:48 pm | January 29, 2004
Cool! You are a great writer. I have read all of your stuff and rate it all 10/10. My favorite is the last chapter of On a Pale Horse so keep fighting the writers block ;)
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RyGy
2:21 am | January 8, 2004
u said "he then" WAAAAAAY too much, other than that, it was good
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Silent Hunter
2:45 am | June 16, 2003
|:/ Ok...
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Steele
10:46 pm | June 15, 2003
For a Silent Hunter, you sure are noisy.
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Silent Hunter
4:15 am | June 11, 2003
...and an obsession with the Apocalypse
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Silent Hunter
4:14 am | June 11, 2003
Actually I DID get the title from the soundtrack ;)
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scope
12:45 am | June 11, 2003
9/10 I get high on Bio foam that some grunt sold me for 50 cents.
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'Nosolee
12:12 am | June 11, 2003
Pale Horse is a track on the HALO soundtrack?!
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Janglurevil7
10:44 pm | June 10, 2003
You got the Pale Horse idea from a different book! I know you did...I have the book, it's all about UFO-ers and stuph! I rate 8/10!
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Wiley K.
6:36 pm | June 10, 2003
Yea, i like the biofoam idea too. I think in Halo 2 I would be pretty cool if you had a grenade like that, filled with arogel, but to make it balanced they have it do no damadge.
Great job. 9.5/10
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Agent Shade
5:58 pm | June 10, 2003
good thinking with the plasma pistol, i always use that in the game to take out the Elite's shields. what do you think the first level in Halo 2 is gonna be? naturally, i think you fight on a Covenant ship. this was a good story and an interesting idea, keep it up 10/10
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SilentHunter
5:31 pm | June 10, 2003
lol, I've always sucked when it came to grammer.
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Nike
4:23 pm | June 10, 2003
Awesome job on writing a novelization for the real Halo 2 game. 10/10. But yes, do use capitalization.
(Yes, I know it's been awhile [again], but Castle Wolfenstein has taken most of my time up. It's a great game. I'm still getting Halo 2 though).
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HiddenAssassin
4:17 pm | June 10, 2003
I like the move with the bio-foam. Good story, 9/10.
Capitolization, though.
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'Nosolee
12:11 pm | June 10, 2003
Hmm, cool. 9/10
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