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Comments for 'The Gods of War:Spartan III's: His Return'



Nick Kang
11:45 am | July 13, 2004
Yeah, there were.
MC
Fred
Will
Linda
Kelly

Go read the books, DL.

NK
Jessica
2:31 am | July 13, 2004
Uh...not all the Spartan's were failures...They really couldn't do anything if they were on the ground, and the Covenant were about to glass them...and anyways, i think there were a few Spartans still alive in First Strike...

Jess
Nick Kang
12:12 am | July 13, 2004
David Li, go rewrite War of the Grunts into a masterpiece and you might gain a teensy-weensy bit of respect around here.

NK
David Li
9:18 pm | July 12, 2004
Hahahahahaha

Die you stupid SPARTAN IIIs. It took reach to train the SPARTAN IIs and they were a failure. Except for the Master Chief of course. This is not a predator movie so don't ever mention the minigun crap again. They require a HUGE motor that in the predator movie seemed way too small. Do you think Earth has the time to train SPARTANS? You suck
Guardian
4:50 pm | July 12, 2004
nice story, but i found that, the Plasma Cannon area, was so lightly guarded at the entrance no gaurds, also the part where the other spartan presses the button, the door opens. I thought the Covie's had high intricate AI's working on security to make sure there's no break in, so that was a bit confusing otherwise i have to say, nice story line, and this keeps the reader interested.

8.5/10

keep them coming
romac1991
12:02 pm | July 12, 2004
Thats great guys...but do you think you can comment on the story. Please.
Thanks


romac1991
Nick Kang
11:29 am | July 12, 2004
I am not giving up on this spammer. There is always some kinda war, and all wars have casualties. I am gonna keep on insulting him until the fact that he is disliked reaches through his extremely thick cranium and he realizes the same.

NK
Jessica
7:08 am | July 12, 2004
Guys, just ignore him...if everybody ignores him, then there would be no point for him to post his pointless insults on HBO anymore, because nobody gives half a rat's ass about his little insults, which don't work by the way...So ss, say what you want, because it doens't bother me, if it bother's other people, fine, but just don't don't do it on my story's comment page, but better yet, don't do it here at all...

Jess
343 Salty Beans
2:51 am | July 12, 2004
Awacar, don't give him the satisfaction of returning his expletives and general bad-mouthing.

Everyone email Louis...that'll get him to shut up for good.

343SB

PS: I've mentioned this on every place he's posted, but....

DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE!

There...that works.
The NEW Zak
1:19 am | July 12, 2004
God! Seriously, is there a way to get Louis Wu to banish this............thing(Spanish Spartan)for good?
Awacar
9:00 pm | July 11, 2004
Seriously, ss, your fucking retarded asshole of a bitch, does it feel good to have CENSORED shoved up you every day? I imagine you screaming in joy.

I would not be surprised if your actions in all that miserable, wasteless period of time that you call "life" has caused someones death.

Now if only I could get Louis to use the BANshee on you, so that you can never ever be seen on HBO again, in other cases, I'll go get the banshee, and let those plasma cannons work wonders on your ass.
russ687
7:57 pm | July 11, 2004
It was better then most (and pure-godly compared to anything spanky spartan could write).

The ending with the MC makes me want to see where this is going. Good job with that.

Overall, 7.5/10.
Nick Kang
6:50 pm | July 11, 2004
I hope I'm not from the same family as you, 'cause then I'd have to change my last name.

NK
spanish spartan
4:19 pm | July 11, 2004
MCC hasn't posted cause he's dead. Nick Kang, i hope im not from the same race as you
someone that you dont know
3:20 pm | July 11, 2004
Ya, great story and all.

Spanish Spartan is a retarded little fucker who should be talking crap about himself and not other people's fan-fiction
OpeningAct
12:57 pm | July 11, 2004
Romac's alive! Good story and don't listen to spanish spartan. He's an utter prick!

OA

P.S I'm now officially back on the FF scene. The first part of my new series should be there in the next update! Huzzah!
Nick Kang
12:50 pm | July 11, 2004
Has anyone noticed who HASN'T returned? MCC. I haven't heard from him in a while.

Great story, romac. Glad to see you're back.

And spanish spartan, maybe you should shove your head up a bull's ass. Then you'd see what bullshit actually looked like. Or, hey, you could look in a mirrior.

NK
Jessica
8:22 am | July 11, 2004
Whoops, i forgot to tell you that it was a good story romac...^.^

Jess
Gemmima
8:06 am | July 11, 2004
Which MC would return and blow spanish spartan into next year with a rocket...

God story by the way Romac :)
Awacar
6:30 am | July 11, 2004
"oh yeah, its a load of BULL SHIT."

ss, are you talking about your own posts again?

The story was good, not the best, but a good story anyway.
LostRock
2:45 am | July 11, 2004
Yes, the story was good...but I'm still not clear on whose return it was (MC's, romac's, or *grumble* spanish spartan's).
spanish spartan
2:44 am | July 11, 2004
oh yeah, its a load of BULL SHIT.
spanish spartan
2:44 am | July 11, 2004
The usual BULL SHIT. BULL SHIT
Black Titan
2:42 am | July 11, 2004
Still a very good sereis. Keep it coming.
romac1991
12:47 am | July 11, 2004
k


romac1991
Jessica
12:43 am | July 11, 2004
Hey romac, if you want, you can send your Spartan III story to me and icould edit it before you submit it to HBO...
Pho
9:34 pm | July 10, 2004
OoOoooo it's gonna get good since MC is here. romac, i guess i'm too noobish to HBO to kno what beef the others had against ya, but damn, this is a great story.
CoLd BlooDed
7:46 pm | July 10, 2004
Well, I said I was going to give you a second chance, so I did. :)

Fairly good story, I enjoyed the read. Don't know what's going to happen between the MC and the others, but I'll have to wait until the next chapter. Good job.
someone that you dont know
2:29 pm | July 10, 2004
You're back? And you said you were never returning.

I dont know what I can say about the story
someone that you dont know
2:29 pm | July 10, 2004
You're back? And you said you were never returning.

I dont know what I can say about the story


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