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Comments for 'The Capture' |
THE DARK ELITE
1:39 am | June 14, 2002
VERY GOOD KEEP THEM COMING
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Jason
3:12 pm | April 13, 2002
yeah, but isn't one man against an entire alien conglomerate as well as bloody thirsty infection-like aliens also a bit excessive? the master chief loves a big fight :D
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The British Commando
5:29 pm | April 11, 2002
Good, but don't you think the two-hundred banshes is just a little too excessive...
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Jaywhit10
9:07 pm | April 9, 2002
Very nice, damn this was good
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Ryan
8:49 pm | April 9, 2002
Like I said, I found out about that this morning too; after sending in my story to run into the same problems!
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max3949
7:26 pm | April 9, 2002
as always, anothor great story.
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Jason
6:34 pm | April 9, 2002
too bad it took you 12 hours to come up with some advice Ryan! and you should have reminded me to send it as an attachment while i was talking to you on MSN (damn rich text editor, it had the italics in there, so i never gave it a second thought) :P
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Ryan
3:50 pm | April 9, 2002
Not bad, 'bud. Everyone, I'd like you to be Jason; he's a friend of mine. I have a few suggestions.1. Use the tip that Vector40 gave me, send your fics in as attachments in the e-mail; that way italics will show up. I found that out this morning. :) 2. Add a bit more description to action. It always helps further the mood your trying to create. 3. Keep up the good work!
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