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Comments for 'Force 81 Part II: Formations in the Desert'



Rey
11:42 pm | January 9, 2003
Before I forget keep up the good work peace n God Bless Bro
Rey
11:39 pm | January 9, 2003
lol good story can me n u talk about linking r stories
lol im sorry, but what kinda name is
12:29 pm | December 23, 2002
Veer? oh well, it doesn't ruin your writing, keep it up
Dispraiser
6:33 am | December 22, 2002
Nice mobile series, not too much of any one elemt, keep up the good work...
NobleWard
8:53 am | December 21, 2002
The next few chapters of my series are going to focus on the backdrop of the entire series; Shunt III and Altar, the orbital command post forunt's defenses. Of course I'm planning on throwing in more cool stuff about Veer's long history and an introduction to the other characters that will work with Jim. Comment on anything you like and would like to see more of or anything you hate and would rather never see again. Try and read through the whole series thus far though so you get where I'm coming from. Thanks.
Noble


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