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Comments for 'The Virus Part 1' |
el_halo_diablo
4:21 pm | April 20, 2003
Sry, but I believe there already is a HunterKiller lol. just as long as he doesn't find out, you're ok ;).
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HunterKiller
5:00 pm | April 19, 2003
Hey! Its me Tommarow just wanted to let you know that this is my new name OK.
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saturn
6:43 pm | April 18, 2003
aww, how sweet. group hug? oh hells no. well glad to see we can all be professional bout everything and get along. we are all united as halo freaks after all.
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James Kinsella
11:29 am | April 18, 2003
You're from Cincinnati Dirty Commie?
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monitor101
4:30 am | April 18, 2003
Don't mention it Tammarow. Yah well I guess the Grunt part was the only downside.
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Tommarow
2:13 am | April 18, 2003
I may have said before, monitor I am sorry for making such a jackass of myself when Flight of the Thunderbird was posted, but you know gotta defend myself. Any ways great story I wondered if any one would think of something besides the Flood. Great story I'm waiting to see how it turns out. just keep away from the Grunt part at the beginnig 8/10.
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monitor101
1:03 am | April 18, 2003
Thanks a lot for the comments evryone! Diablo yes I've read "The Hot Zone" by Richard Preston and I've seen Outbreak, the virus that I have made up is based on Ebloa and the strain that your talking about in the monkey is Ebloa Reston. There are many strains of ebloa and an outbreak of ebloa would be ten times worse then AIDS or CANCER or any other virus that this earth has seen. No wonder it is a Bio saftey level 4 virus just like West nile, with no known cure. Saturn you just wait and see the plot may be a little more than you would expect I like to give hints. Oh and Saturn the virus is a little bit more complex.
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Dirty Commie
10:01 pm | April 17, 2003
Woo! Cincy! Yeah!
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James Kinsella
7:08 pm | April 17, 2003
What are you talking about, sarge? I have never left a comment under any name but my own. James Kinsella is my real name. Why do you think my email is listed as jckinsella@cinci.rr.com.
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Shadow Spartan
5:51 pm | April 17, 2003
a very good story monitor...i didnt mind your other series, it wasnt bad, but this is a helluva lot better, keep it going dude 9/10
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Sarge
3:57 pm | April 17, 2003
Don't you just love it when people yell at themselves? When they act like their not the ones leaving the bad comments even though they've admitted to doing it lol...
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James Kinsella
2:45 pm | April 17, 2003
Okay, those comments were just dumb. Don't waste HBO bandwidth.
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Steele
2:40 pm | April 17, 2003
Not too shabby. 8.5/10. Original and fresh.
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Dispraiser's Mum
11:02 am | April 17, 2003
Please come back home
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
11:00 am | April 17, 2003
monitor101, i just read ur 1st comment. why bother indent, is dispraiser ur aunt or something? I HATE ..... CHESS, why, i dont know, please dont hurt me, HOW DARE YOU SPEAK TO ME LIKE THAT, i wont bother u again, i promise, NONE OF THAT MY DEAR, LET ME TEND TO UR WOUNDS....aaaaagggggghhhhhhh me harteeees! hello mum os the cake greasy???
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Lord Proto Betty
10:55 am | April 17, 2003
Just making sure you lot are behaving yourselves. Looks like old dispraiser has pissed off... Good story
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Spartan III
3:54 am | April 17, 2003
Finally, a brand new idea for a fan-fic. I will keep track of this story.
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ThreadedAce3
2:58 am | April 17, 2003
sounds like you have a good plot line going on here...keep it up. I'm looking forward to this series
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el_halo_diablo
2:38 am | April 17, 2003
Oh and Saturn's right. There was once a form of Ebola virus in the United states that was actually airborne, but it turned out it only killed Monkeys, which was a close call, cause only about 2% of the population would survive such a dreadful virus.
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el_halo_diablo
2:38 am | April 17, 2003
Sounds like Ebola Virus. Bleeding out.
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James Kinsella
2:00 am | April 17, 2003
Cool idea. I wonder if it was at all inspired by our current War with Iraq. I hope you keep this series alive. Too soon to tell about the plot, but you've said that it gets better, so I'll wait to comment, for now. Keep it up!
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Sarge
1:48 am | April 17, 2003
Weird my post went in between all yalls
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Sarge
1:44 am | April 17, 2003
After the whole beginning grunt part was over the story was very easy for me to picture I was actually picturing the story in my mind as it was going on...
GJ m8
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Sarge
1:44 am | April 17, 2003
After the whole beginning grunt part was over the story was very easy for me to picture I was actually picturing the story in my mind as it was going on...
GJ m8
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saturn
9:54 pm | April 16, 2003
bio-weapons! a very unique and fresh idea. I have the impression that johnson made the grenade but im a little confused. Just remember that a virus that kills covenant does not necessarliy kill humans, but it can, for you next story.
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Havok
8:24 pm | April 16, 2003
powerful beginning to the story. held my attention the whole way through. hope the rest of the series is like this one.
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Red
8:13 pm | April 16, 2003
I was going to complain that you already revealed the whole plot too early, but you remedied that with your post. Most all of the complaints I had early on (such as the seemingly meaningless grunt appearance) were later cured as well, but tehre was almost no loose ends in this fanfic that would need to be tied in a later fanfic besides what the Grunt had seen. A little more decription in regards to the environment would have been nice, but this one seems to be consistent in quality with most other fanfics.
Good luck on this one...
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monitor101
6:45 pm | April 16, 2003
Thanks TM. I was thinking before I started this one, if I should have named it Outbreak or The Plague, but came up with The Virus.
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Traumatised Marine
6:41 pm | April 16, 2003
Congrats monitor101, a fresh idea with some interesting scope. Don't make it too linear, and this ought to be one to watch.
The title's good- It's a bold, to-the-point title that let's you know the core of the idea of the story. And as no one's done one on a Plague before, it should draw readers.
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monitor101
6:39 pm | April 16, 2003
Well I hope this makes up for my last fic. I tried to indent but the thing wouldn't let me. If you think that it doesn't havea plot, think again. This story will have several twists and turns.
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