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Comments for 'The Virus Part 11 (Finale)'



HunterKiller
8:19 pm | November 8, 2003
Hey! Sorry I haven't been around for awhile, my computer took a shit on me and I haven't got a new one until now. Well monitor, I will comment on all the ones I have missed, this is the best FUCKING story I ever read!
monitor101
9:34 pm | October 3, 2003
Thanks for the comments and thank you MasterGrunt.
MasterGrunt
9:43 pm | September 24, 2003
Woa. Awesome. Spectactular. Okay let me get a hold of myself. Again monitor 101 has turned out a truly well done story(how does he do it). Oh and Dispraiser if you going say that the finale was a disapointment you need to support it with facts.
monitor101
9:52 pm | September 22, 2003
What the hell are you talking about? Shut up you annoying fag.
Dispraiser
1:41 am | September 21, 2003
I'm not going to ignore the problem. It seemed as if this fanfic owuld grow with each chapter, but this one is a dissapointment compared to the last two, and that should never happen in a finale.
monitor101
8:18 pm | September 20, 2003
Thats all it is to you Dispraiser is grammer even if the smallest typo you'll be all over it like your obsession with indenting.
monitor101
8:18 pm | September 20, 2003
Dude Hunter_killer that sucks I love that fic.
Hunter_Killer
4:48 pm | September 20, 2003
Great story, but Wu wouldn't post my on-demand story: The Newest Chapter in a Series called: A Series of Wierd Events! =(
Dispraiser
3:00 pm | September 20, 2003
It could still use a little moer polishing in this last part. Grammar is a little lacking, especially int he last sentence.
Jinkaiden-XI
2:36 pm | September 20, 2003
I liked the final chapter if this part, and I can't wait for the next section. By the way, I'm going to put ILoD on hold for a while, for I'm working on my next series.

Great job, looking for the next addition.
Mainevent
2:06 pm | September 20, 2003
Good Ending

I have a feeling Uplink Technologies may be in the next series.....


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