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Comments for 'The Virus Part 10'



Mastergrunt
11:18 am | September 21, 2003
Great story. I'm a big fan of this series.
monitor101
9:34 pm | September 18, 2003
Thanks for the comments
monitor101
9:32 pm | September 18, 2003
Yah well Dispraiser I used to do that and I still do much of what you said is bull but thanks anyways.
monitor101
9:32 pm | September 18, 2003
Dispraiser what you saying about this used to suck to you all its about it grammer grammer grammer and sometimes it gets very annoying.
pooman
7:03 pm | September 17, 2003
good
Dispraiser
1:46 am | September 17, 2003
Yeah, most fanfics that suck stay this way, but this one has improved a ton. Also it seems like you've improved a ton. It used to be that you were a bad review baby, and whenever anyone would give you anything but a ten of ten you would tell them to suck your ass, then five more people would trash the fnafic and suddenly they were right. But anyways, keep this fanfic going, maybe a little more environmental moods going (but that is a little more advanced) and try to keep true to the game and to humanity.
Vi3tl3l3oi 023(Return of CPT CRAPPER)
12:43 am | September 17, 2003
Great indeed 10/10
Sergeant B
7:03 pm | September 16, 2003
I totally agree with Dispraser. Nice work!
Dispraiser
6:47 pm | September 16, 2003
This is one of the fanfics I look at, not because it's great, but because it doesn't suck. Originally this fanfic was very crappy, but parts like these are above average. Better work by far.
'Nosolee
12:21 pm | September 16, 2003
Great, 10/10


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