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Comments for 'The Virus Part 8'



Alpha Lance
8:18 pm | September 1, 2003
Forgot to score, 9.5/10. And excellent writting.
Alpha Lance
8:15 pm | September 1, 2003
I agree with Crash W. Use the BOLD. And here is how you bold, [b] to start bold and [/b] to end bold. Just if you didn't, and you can also figer out how to bold and all that others stuff in the directions on the fanfic form.

- Alpha Lance

P.S. Read my my 'Halo Trilogy' and my peoms.
crashedwarthog
5:49 am | August 30, 2003
again...use some bold writing!!!
Knightmare(MM
12:57 am | August 29, 2003
The fight scene 'went on a bit'?

Really now, that's how it would be. You can't nail the author for realism. Both elites are skilled and very capable Warriors, and likely have the ability to continue on for much longer than they did.
pooman
7:21 pm | August 28, 2003
kool 10/10
Havok
11:31 am | August 28, 2003
im still likeing this story, even though i havent been around for a long time. its a rough time right now people, and i have such a shitload of college crap to do its amazing. but ill try to get on as much as i can.
Cool Silverthorn
10:24 am | August 28, 2003
Well done that man, your parents should be proud old chap.Although the fight scene between the elites went on a bit, but still, great work!
Grinning Reaper
10:23 am | August 28, 2003
Holy Shit! This is an excellent story and if you don't put in another one soon i'll ram your balls so far down your neck they'll come out your arse.
Wado
10:19 pm | August 27, 2003
Excellent writing.


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