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Comments for 'The Virus Part 3' |
monitor101
9:39 pm | June 28, 2003
Amen!
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HunterKiler
4:26 am | June 7, 2003
Red Shut The Fuck Up! We Don't Want To Listen To you.
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el_halo_diablo
2:26 pm | May 20, 2003
execution you mean? It doesn't matter, it was still a pretty good read, and there weren't any melting eyeballs in this one! ;D
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monitor101
8:31 pm | May 9, 2003
It was an exacution dumass.
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Manuel
5:20 am | May 9, 2003
Why did the Elite kill the other Elite???
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monitor101
1:21 am | May 9, 2003
Thanks for the comments and the story is not all about just the virus.
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Agent Shade
10:19 pm | May 6, 2003
lol, good job on the Nosliw, it isnt that bad of a name for a Grunt, even though its from Gotham. It was a good story monitor, please keep it up, i like this series. 9/10
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HunterKiller
10:37 pm | May 5, 2003
Good I liked it and the name is good for a grunt. Anyways next time try to get over to the humans and how there dealing with it.
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Steele
9:59 pm | May 5, 2003
Do you not know about the HTML formatting tags, monitor? If you don't just click on the thing that says: READ THESE OR ELSE!" They'll pop up in a seperate window.
It's easy to come up with Covie names, just follow my simple guide:
1. For Grunts: Simply type a sound that a cat would make when coughing up a hairball.
2. For Elites: Make sure you have an apostrophe in front of their last name and make sure it ends with something close to ryhming with tummy.
3. For Hunters: Give 'em three names with two being the same one for the bond brothers. Make the others classic short German w/o the Von.
4. For Jackals: Use a verb having something to do with eating something.
Nosliw isn't a bad Grunt name, in my opinion.
Good story! 8.7/10, Keep up the bloody good work.
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scope
9:45 pm | May 5, 2003
9/10 I think grunts are cool so i liked the story
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monitor101
8:36 pm | May 5, 2003
First indent tags what the hell are you talking about? Morris I play a little of Gotham and saw my brother typing in the cheat so yes thats where I got the name shit I cant come up with covie names.
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Red
8:08 pm | May 5, 2003
It looks like you will be pretty pissed off when reading this, so iw ill not really comment, but the use of indent tags (and the minute it would take you on such a short fanfic) would really help.
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John Morris
7:19 pm | May 5, 2003
Decent story considering the angle, but the name is just cheap, Nosliw? Huuummm I wonder who didnt beat Project Gotham? I'm being fecisious but it was an ok read pretty detailed for the exception of grammer and well some other minor flaws, 7/10.
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ThreadedAce3
6:14 pm | May 5, 2003
Other than a few spelling/ grammatical errors here and there, the story overall was very well. In the future i suggest that you read through your stories out loud to yourself just to check one last time before you post. That usually helps to find the last small errors. Once again besides those few things... it was very interesting to read. Good Job!
-ThreadedAce3
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