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Comments for 'Marines are fighting this war, not Spartans-Prologue' |
SOS.Odin
11:35 am | September 24, 2003
these guys critisize too much.
i dint think it was bad.
not like ur a writer for profession.
gj
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Spartan117
11:49 am | August 14, 2003
sorry guys, i was in a rush on that one, but the one im going to write next, will be better... hopefully, and sorry i spelt Chief wrong a whole bunch of times!!! hope u like my other one, Legiment To My Marines!
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pj-NYkr90
10:42 pm | August 13, 2003
8/10 It's good. But there are a couple of problems. First off, it was too short and nearly underdetailed. Add more to the battle, like, say for instance that two Grunts came up on his right and he was out of ammo. Then, he throws the gun in one's face, takes it's pistol, and kills him both. That's the only real problem i have with it. The others are your indents and grammer, they sucked.
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Tango709
9:56 pm | August 13, 2003
it was good but too quick. the covenant retreated too fast, and you failed to descirbe the deaths of Marines. it sounded like you just said. "and some marines died. the end." that was annoying. be more descriptive, and indent, please.
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Alpha Lance
6:57 pm | August 13, 2003
8/10,please indean next time.
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JCDenton
6:52 pm | August 13, 2003
hmm... nice work. good perspective, but eep trying. you have got a nice story. 8/10
JCDenton
Creator of Halo: The MCconto Chronicles©
(Part 6 and 7 released: find them via search items)
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