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Comments for 'The Pelican Bond' |
teemus
8:44 am | December 6, 2003
You need to break up the paragraphs and start a new one whenever somebody talks.
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Awacar
2:19 pm | December 1, 2003
The little covard that wants Agent Shades name to be defamated, show yourself! Unless you're afraid of daylight...
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CoLd BlooDed
12:38 pm | December 1, 2003
I dont no shade, but they did the same thing in the other comment section
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Agent Shade (the real one)
12:22 pm | December 1, 2003
fucking christ, why are people pretending to be me?!?!?! i'm sorry guys, that wasn't me that said it sucks....if it continues to happen, i dunno, but Louis Wu has to hear about this....sorry....
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Dispraiser
4:59 am | December 1, 2003
The name in here actually gave me an alright idea for a fanfic. Probably won't write it though.
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Walker
11:55 pm | November 30, 2003
I'll excuse TM's slur on our great President and his father, because he is right on with what I've been predicting the past year: China will be the leader of the world within 20 years, and we'll be another tagalong nation. Unless there is a war, in which case we stand a fighting chance. Stupid Commies.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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CoLd BlooDed
8:46 pm | November 30, 2003
Their slowly invading Canada too. Lol, but I can't do much about it and neither can anyone else.
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Traumatised Marine
7:50 pm | November 30, 2003
...don't just sit there, DO SOMETHING!!!
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Traumatised Marine
7:45 pm | November 30, 2003
Cripes, with USA's George Dubyas and steadily crumbliing work ethic, and the UK's impending Alaska-climate catastrophe and developing binge-drinking culture among the youth, the dominant English speaking section of the Western world is due to collapse!!
Then the Chinese will move in!!!
WE'LL ALL BE SPEAKING MANDERIN OR NIPPONESE OR WHATEVER!!! AND END UP WORKING 18 HOUR DAYS ALL YEAR!!!!
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CovieKilla
6:00 pm | November 30, 2003
Yeah, that doesnt seem like Shade at all....Im gunna ask him next time hes on MSN...but thats just wierd...he was at some other fic and also said it sucks and Ive never seen him say that. EVER.
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Anonymous
5:08 pm | November 30, 2003
I don't think that's Shade to be honest with you
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Hawk7886
8:30 am | November 30, 2003
It's a conspiracy. This is only the second time my review was nicer than everyone elses. The end is near . . .
Although the standards for America is falling at a steady rate, we still have Bungie :)
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Dispraiser
6:20 am | November 30, 2003
When Hawk is nicer to yoru fanfic than anyone else, you know you have trouble. The spacing around tthe speakers thing is a BIG problem. It shows that you, unlike many of the other authors here, DO NOT KNOW ENGLISH. Sure you can take a few words and a basic plot, throw em together and get a "fanfic" done, generally one where MC meets a small battle or challenge, wins it simply by shooting his enemies or getting a little lucky, maybe a few lines of spotty dialogue, but these epople have the foggiest ideas of what they're doing. Your flackfic on the other hand simply manages to show me further how incompetent America is. If you go to any other continent bar Africa and South America, EVERYONE in the nation is more competant than many Americans. As much as I love America, I fear that the end is near.
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Agent Shade
5:32 am | November 30, 2003
One word... SUCKS!!!
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Hawk7886
2:26 am | November 30, 2003
When people say things, it starts a new paragraph. try to at least space out your story. A block of words is hard to read.
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Who Cares?
1:38 am | November 30, 2003
What?
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Chechen fighter
10:09 pm | November 29, 2003
Cool, keep it coming.
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