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Comments for 'An Undying Hope -- part 1: Hell in the Valley'



Dispraiser
3:58 am | March 25, 2003
D-!!!!

- - -TRY ORIGINALITY!!!
+ it ended... Right? Please...
- - - Blah Blah, blah blah. Wait, taht was the story?
+ Gave me a good ole' trash someone's fanfic fest!
Dispraiser
3:58 am | March 25, 2003
D-!!!!

- - -TRY ORIGINALITY!!!
+ it ended... Right? Please...
- - - Blah Blah, blah blah. Wait, taht was the story?
+ Gave me a good ole' trash someone's fanfic fest!
Dispraiser
3:58 am | March 25, 2003
Also, I had no idea guns talked when they fired...
Steele
12:54 pm | March 19, 2003
Dashavoo?
gruntkiller
12:47 pm | March 19, 2003
unoriginal, boring and as before has been done a 1000 times before, i was hoping that you reworked this to make it more original or at least explain whats going on a bit more, but you didn't, my only suggestion is to sit back and think of somethin new and change this series around it the next chapter or to abandon it all together and start somthin new and impressive.

im just going to use red's system for rating here to show just how disappointing this is

2.0 out of a possible 10.0 its just that bad


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