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Anonymous
8:12 pm | October 29, 2003
mainevent
SOS.Odin
6:58 pm | October 29, 2003
thx ME
Mainevent
12:31 pm | October 29, 2003
I dunno his patterns, but i'd say right before friday or saturday (late night) to get it in.)
SOS.Odin
3:38 am | October 29, 2003
RAY BRADBURY IS PIMP
i only read martian chronicles and farenheit 451 tho...dunno if he wrote any others...and what would be the best day to post a story...im finishin the next istallment of SOS right now...just need to know when the best time to post would be
Mainevent
2:44 am | October 29, 2003
The link is on the forum.

And this is a short story.

THere may be a follow up, but it's not a series.
Sergeant B
1:18 am | October 29, 2003
Really good Mainevent. But it was short. Wait...Is this a short story and part of a series? I don't know. And does anyone know what the link to the First Strike preview is? I can't wait for it!!
Mainevent
11:51 pm | October 28, 2003
Ha, yea, I just read it. I loved it.
Walker
11:50 pm | October 28, 2003
Wow, that's the kinda thing I'd expect from Ray Bradbury. Ten-ten. It'd be even funnier if they were regular ants, and reacted with the Covenant so badly that they caused Elites to shrivel up, Grunts to explode, and Jackals to drop down dead. Dang... that'd make a good series, if you would write it:

"The Ants".

Semper Fi

-Walker
Mainevent
10:50 pm | October 28, 2003
No, I don't have HPC, and no one will put the bastard on the internet...
Mainevent
10:50 pm | October 28, 2003
No, I don't have HPC, and no one will put the bastard on the internet...
SOS,Odin
10:39 pm | October 28, 2003
have u read the first strike prieview yet?
SOS.Odin
10:18 pm | October 28, 2003
haha that was great
10/10
just great ahhaha
dude
1:00 pm | October 28, 2003
Nice ants mmmmmmm.....yummy
Mainevent
12:36 pm | October 28, 2003
Oops, my bad.

Well, it was plasma bullets :)
Steve Ollett
10:59 am | October 28, 2003
That was great! Excellent writing as you have the Elite recount the story from an interview/debriefing point of view - the Elite thinking that the whole thing was some kind of biological attack on them. Nice little twist at the end with the ants being an accidental thing.

One small point - you mention the elite firing a pistol with bullets - That sounds more like a human projectile weapon that a Covenant type thing. (Yes I know that the Covie do have projectile weapons like the Needler)

Overall: 9/10

Steve.


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