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Comments for 'Rebirth - The Child Within' |
Wado
5:33 am | November 25, 2003
Hello Vero. Now where's that story you were working on?
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Vero
5:21 am | November 23, 2003
Hey Wado, Shadow, Knightmare and everyone else. I am back finally. Don't know if you all remember me, but hey i am back. Just checking to see how everyone is doing. I am doing just fine. Just got my comp back after getting it fixed. Well i see ya'll latrer.
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Jink
4:11 pm | November 22, 2003
How refreshing. I've always been a fan of the Rebirth series, and when I saw the first of the newest addition, I jumped up and said, "Kick ass! How many more are there gonna be?!"
Well, great job. Following up what Wado said, it got confusing, details were excellent, story was wonderful, Shade is a bitch...so on and so on...
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endertrick
12:09 pm | November 22, 2003
... wtf?
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endertrick
12:04 pm | November 22, 2003
lol. i wont say u suck but i do think it sucks that you write shade... ur a talented writer but u could use your talent for beter stuff... i still hate shade... lol the other thing i wanted to no was... do shadow and shade ever meet, meanin should i read the shade stories thruoghly to get the full grasp of the story. shade really doesnt suck but im too lazy to get into another plot, the fight scene with the hunters was good but im to tired to learn the new characters and that stuff, its much easier to get to no as human character and human names and that is why i cling to shadow
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endertrick
12:04 pm | November 22, 2003
lol. i wont say u suck but i do think it sucks that you write shade... ur a talented writer but u could use your talent for beter stuff... i still hate shade... lol the other thing i wanted to no was... do shadow and shade ever meet, meanin should i read the shade stories thruoghly to get the full grasp of the story. shade really doesnt suck but im too lazy to get into another plot, the fight scene with the hunters was good but im to tired to learn the new characters and that stuff, its much easier to get to no as human character and human names and that is why i cling to shadow
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endertrick
12:04 pm | November 22, 2003
lol. i wont say u suck but i do think it sucks that you write shade... ur a talented writer but u could use your talent for beter stuff... i still hate shade... lol the other thing i wanted to no was... do shadow and shade ever meet, meanin should i read the shade stories thruoghly to get the full grasp of the story. shade really doesnt suck but im too lazy to get into another plot, the fight scene with the hunters was good but im to tired to learn the new characters and that stuff, its much easier to get to no as human character and human names and that is why i cling to shadow
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EnderTrick
6:26 am | November 22, 2003
Agent U rock... SHADE SUX... by by now
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EnderTrick
6:24 am | November 22, 2003
I WIN I WIN!!!!!
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EnderTrick
6:24 am | November 22, 2003
Wado: the forum was prty funny.. not goin back again!
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Knightmare(MM
5:51 am | November 22, 2003
I don't go on MSN that much anymore. Not sure about the others. Ender, Shade and Shadow just had contact in the part before this one. Monitor... we're battling? If we are, can you let me win?
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monitor101
4:45 am | November 22, 2003
Don't mind me I'm just watching from the sidelines watching all the veteran writers battle it out...sweet!
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Wado
4:11 am | November 22, 2003
Shade is the name of a character in the story, not you Agent Shade...lol.
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Agent Shade
3:29 am | November 22, 2003
i'm a cool guy :(
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Wado
1:32 am | November 22, 2003
endertrick, I think you refreshed your browser after posting. Happens to everyone at least once. After posting, click on the main Fan Fiction link and then click back at the comments for the story. That way you can refresh all you want without double posting.
Now Knightmare, you have been missing in action. You guys not on MSN messenger anymore?
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Knightmare(MM
11:53 pm | November 21, 2003
Hey, glad you're hating Shade. You'll start to REALLY hate her later. Now... SHADOW writes Shadow stuff. I write Shade stuff, if you'd like to say I suck, please do. Don't bitch at the character, thanks.
Anyway, a few more characters will be introduced pretty soon. Keep your eyes open.
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endertrick
11:12 pm | November 21, 2003
ok so i looked at the other series and iv figured out wats up. i liked rebirth-shadow and i HATE shade.. shes a covie bitch that sucks.. i mean honor was great and so was the beginin of rebirth-shadow but shade is just terrible... ur a great writier dont write shade crap
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endertrick
11:08 pm | November 21, 2003
ok. i read it and u guys r sorta freakin me out... this is like the last peice before it started to get good... u had a good story line goin.. i think the end of the last thign was a barfight and now u go back to shade... who is anoying and i couldnt care less about... im gonan look at the rest of the serise to see wats goin on...
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endertrick
10:59 pm | November 21, 2003
OMFG its been a shit long time since u wrote... thought u guys were gone... now to read wat should b the greatest story since shadows last story...
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monitor101
10:18 pm | November 21, 2003
Sweet story guys. 10/10 this is a great series!
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Wado
8:53 pm | November 21, 2003
Nice, full of vivid descriptions.
Still a bit confusing at times, but I think it is more a difference in style of writing and not the quality. The quality is there.
Keep it up, great job.
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