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Comments for 'Evanangel (part 01)'



Jinkaiden-XI
7:46 pm | October 13, 2003
I realize that sixty million people is not much compared to what the world's population will no doubt be in that year. However, I wanted to make it seem like not all is lost. In the coming chapters, their will be descriptions of the revolution on Earth, and how it is actually fairly balanced. Likewise, Evanangel itself will play a major role in the outcome of the revolution, not to mention the people of Phaethon as well.

You'll see. The numbers will waver and they will grow, but I am trying to describe a very even and balanced war, not just something the humans are destined to lose.
J-117
3:43 pm | October 13, 2003
good man very good, but 60 million isn't a lot of dead people i would be thinking of more then 600 million cuz this earth has over 6 billion and still in the future i would believe that the earth has at least a couple billion humans, unless the opulation was down to 60 million then it would be more... i'm not thinking realistic but the other word like it, if u know wat i mean...
MasterGrunt
1:53 am | October 11, 2003
Awesome story, man.
Jinkaiden-XI
12:07 am | October 7, 2003
Heh, unlike In Light of Destiny, I came up with this and organized it within a week. It took me a while to write it, and I'm working on the second part now, which won't be completed for a while.
Also, In Light of Destiny lives on; I've just given birth to another series first. I like overlapping my series so that there isn't any gap between them.

About Evanangel: This whole new series is going to be a multiple series action drama sort of thing. I don't know how long it will be yet, but the first part is always experimental.
Alpha Lance
9:18 pm | October 6, 2003
First to post. Now...Jinkaiden, I have to say, "killer story!"

I really love that plot you gave it, the plot is just perfect. That ship 'Evanangel' put's a good twice to the story too.

I hope to see more, and I just can't wait for the next part to this one of a kind series. (10/10)


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