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Comments for 'The Twelve Days of Halo'



JR_0420
6:54 pm | December 16, 2003
Very funny. This is one of the best things I have read on this site.
witelancer
3:38 am | December 7, 2003
damn, you've got talent. *reccomends to louis as official fanfic correspondent*.. is bored, but this is the shit, man.

-10/10
hornet34
6:31 pm | December 6, 2003
That's what I figured, so thats why I wasn't I didn't come out and accuse, just noted the facts. This was really pretty entertaining, and for a n00b to come up with something like this shows that he has serious potential. Keep up the good work.
FOrunnER
5:03 pm | December 6, 2003
I liked it, a nice little christmas charol.
FOrunnER
5:03 pm | December 6, 2003
The only thing I can critize is that it would have fit better if you had just said a Warthog LRV.

9.7/10

P.S. to Hornet:

I think Jason is relatively new so I dont think he has read much of Jillybeans stuff.
Mastergrunt
4:39 pm | December 6, 2003
Lol, where did you get this. Liked the the two grunts a screaming part.
SOS.Odin
3:54 pm | December 6, 2003
frickin pimp man
just in case ya didnt know
walker musta thoght this was quite good
hes gettin ppl to come read ur stuff
i did
and i loved it
Jamirus99
12:56 pm | December 6, 2003
Lol, it's all good here. Loved the Elites a worting part.
teemus
8:10 am | December 6, 2003
Loved it. 10/10
hornet34
4:18 am | December 6, 2003
O.K. I that was pretty good, but I have to be just a LITTLE critical. Didn't Jillybean insert something like this into her story? I ain't trying to say that your ripping her off, you might not have even read it, I'm just pointing it out. That aside, I liked it. Although I though it should have been two grunts a-grunting instead of two screaming grunts. Keep up the good work, though.
CovieKilla
1:09 am | December 6, 2003
That was great! Good job...I enjoyed it and now I cant wait till Christmas. Thanks alot! (LOL) Yep it was good. 10/10
Sentinel
11:08 pm | December 5, 2003
Great for the Christmas holidays.
??
4:14 pm | December 5, 2003
Interesting but, kinda scary
Walker
12:42 pm | December 5, 2003
A true work of art. 10/10.


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