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Comments for 'Just Getting Started Chapter Five'



Arthur Wellesly
2:44 pm | April 5, 2003
Hey, I don't know what Anthony is talking about. Having an actual story is not a bad thing - indeed, it has become increasingly rare in FF. I enjoyed the whole series thus far, notwithstanding the absence of nonstop blood and gore. A change of pace is good. 9.5/10. Keep writing, James.
James Kinsella
2:17 am | April 5, 2003
Then I hope you don't mind cause the next one will be all humans, not a Covie in sight, until the end...
Anthony Coronado
12:12 am | April 5, 2003
I can already tell that Kinsella is one of those types that like to explain and elaborate rather than put blood in every chapter... Believe me, that's not a bad thing, but it gets old and bland, and many readers tend to loose interest in your stories...
monitor101
9:54 pm | April 4, 2003
Good story Kinsella!
Steele
9:23 pm | April 4, 2003
This story receives an 80. That is pretty good. Check my grading scale.
James Kinsella
7:19 pm | April 4, 2003
Hope you guys like it. The next one is gonna make you question Captain Gates' sanity.


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