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Comments for 'The Adventures of Alpha Squad, Part Two' |
Alpha Lance
4:54 am | October 28, 2003
Kick ass story H_K. Every already cover everything. Now, at my school, we don't say peace out or anything. We'll just say seeya. Mostly when people are mad at each other, they'll say stupid stuff like, "I'm going to kick you puck ass." Or, "shut up you puck ass bitch." then they will fight or just walk off. LOL
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FOrunnER
2:08 am | October 28, 2003
Peace Out is just the way everbody says bye at my school. Its my motto, like Walker says Semper Fi' all the time.
Awnser youre question?
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Sergeant B
1:38 am | October 28, 2003
So H_K, you're ten? LOL. And why do you [FOrunnER] say peace out? And what the hell does it mean?
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FOrunnER
5:08 pm | October 27, 2003
It ws okay. But (not to pressure you or anything) it's not really the award winning material people have come to expect from you. I'd like to point out a few details:
One: Where the hell are they?
Two: Try to make the action I little more interesting, I found myself skipping through parts.
Three: That sniper rifle is unreaslistic. a sniper rifle cant fire shotgun shells and ar bullets, it just can't.
Four: We know virtually nothing about the main charactor. Try to establish bonds with him and the reader.
Well, thats about it. Sorry if I was a little harsh, but thats what I think is wrong with the story. Peace Out
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$$$
5:08 pm | October 27, 2003
$$$
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Hunter_Killer
12:26 pm | October 27, 2003
What? You no like???? =(
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