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Comments for 'The Harvest Campaign Chapter 4' |
Cheeny
7:36 am | January 3, 2004
Pretty Good. Few grammer mistakes. A-
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witelancer
6:44 pm | December 29, 2003
Your series has improved a lot. Still, a few grammar mistakes... and don't worry about bolding. If people are going to be all nitpicky... *sighs*...
-9/10
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Alpha Lance
2:23 am | December 29, 2003
Well, I didn't like your lack of the code. You should indent, you should use bold on the date, and use italization on ship names. A few grammar mistakes. Overall this is a C.
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Fleet Admiral
7:52 pm | December 28, 2003
Thanks. I'll try not to use "he" that much.
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Helljumper
7:39 am | December 27, 2003
it was ok, there were parts that u just kept saying "he" this and "he" that. it takes away from the flow, i know, i made the same mistake my first time
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teemus
2:21 am | December 27, 2003
It was alright, a few grammer mistakes, over all its a,
9/10
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monitor101
10:59 pm | December 26, 2003
Well your grammer has definitly improved. And I loved the ship-to-ship combat. 10/10
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