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Comments for 'The Harvest Campaign Chapter 2' |
witelancer
6:47 pm | December 1, 2003
hmmm... the story has decent fleet combat, but maybe you should introduce some characters earlier.. this allows for more character development, like mr. scorpion said. i found it an interesting read though... fills in the holes in the TFOR timeline... always a good thing.
8.5/10
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Teemus
4:57 pm | November 27, 2003
Great stroy man. Ive always wonderd how they got harvest back. I cant wait till the next one in the sieris
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SaGe ScOrPiOn
2:19 pm | November 26, 2003
great story and technical info, and pretty good characters. but you were really lacking in character development, such as the fighter pilot, Ensign Register. the only reason we knew that he was cocky and arrogant and ambitious was because you basically came right out and TOLD us. but, other than that, the only thing that was wrong was some grammar, and spelling mistakes.
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Da General
4:05 am | November 25, 2003
great story
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